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Money is result of people's behavior that people doing something like working,investing and it could a reward from evil.
It is not easy and simple to get it like raising the trees.
Raising the tree is affect from weather or people's effort.
But earning the money's has more complicated causes.
Especially such as people's lucky is affected it.
And I think hard work can raise the probability to make money.
But it needs their healty conditions and it is also related in lucky too.

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Hello, Ms. Sunny!
The saying "money doesn't grow on trees" means that money is a valuable resource that requires effort and careful management to obtain and spend, and it's not something that comes easily or is readily available.
Thank you for your homework!
Aki~

Money is result of people's behavior that people doing something like working,investing and it could a reward from evil.
>>> Money is the result of people's behavior that people do something as working, investing, and it could be a reward from the evil.

It is not easy and simple to get it like raising the trees.
>>> It is not as easy and simple to get it as raising trees.

Raising the tree is affect from weather or people's effort.
>>> Growing a tree is affected by weather or people's effort.

But earning the money's has more complicated causes.
>>> But earning the money has more complicated causes.

Especially such as people's lucky is affected it.
>>>  Especially such as people's luck is affected by it.

And I think hard work can raise the probability to make money.
>>> And I think hard work can raise the probability of making money.

But it needs their healty conditions and it is also related in lucky too.
>>> But it needs their healty conditions and it is also related in lucky too.

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