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Experiencing discrimination or prejudice.

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Have you ever experienced any kind of discrimination or prejudice? Please share your experience and how you dealt with it.

In Korea, 20 to 30 years ago, women faced more discrimination than men. I also had such an experience when I was an elementary school student. My teacher said that only boys could be the president, and girls could only be the vice president. I insisted that it was unfair for girls to be restricted from being the president, so I was proudly elected as the class president.

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Hi, Racheal! THank you for sharing this story. You must be proud of your young self for having such awareness and sense of justice. Let's hope more younger people have the same ideals for a better society. 
--Teacher Anji

In Korea, 20 to 30 years ago, women faced more discrimination than men. 
>> CORRECT
I also had such an experience when I was an elementary school student. 
>> CORRECT
My teacher said that only boys could be the president, and girls could only be the vice president. 
>> CORRECT
I insisted that it was unfair for girls to be restricted from being the president, so I was proudly elected as the class president.
>> CORRECT
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