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Do you believe cheating can ever be justified in certain situations

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I can't think of suitable situations right now where cheating would be acceptable.
Of course, it is easy to think that it should not be allowed under any circumstances.
However, I think there must be situations that I couldn't think of, so I want to leave an acceptable possibility.
This is because life and death are at stake or people become definitely weak-hearted towards the weak.
Just like Valjean stole bread. Unless our life is truly at stake, we should not cheat. Because only then can society remain safe and many people can live safely in it. In that sense, I would like to say that it is unacceptable.

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Hello, Seo Yon~
I believe it is difficult to defend undesirable behaviors such as cheating. However, I think that there are always exceptions, particularly in situations where you are in danger, as you mentioned. I believe that this is how life is lived in this world, which isn't always kind and perfect. :/
Chammy
 I can't think of suitable situations right now where cheating would be acceptable.
OR
>>There aren't any appropriate circumstances that come to mind at the moment where cheating would be justified.
Of course, it is easy to think that it should not be allowed under any circumstances.
OR
>> The idea that it should never be permitted is already given.
However, I think there must be situations that I couldn't think of, so I want to leave an acceptable possibility.
OR
>> On the other hand, I want to consider it acceptable in some circumstances that I am not sure of yet.
This is because life and death are at stake or people become definitely weak-hearted towards the weak.
>>Correct
Just like Valjean stole bread.
OR
>>In the same way that Valjean stole bread.
Unless our life is truly at stake, we should not cheat. 
OR
>> We should refrain from cheating unless our lives are in danger.
Because only then can society remain safe and many people can live safely in it.
>>Correct
In that sense, I would like to say that it is unacceptable.
OR
>> I would like to state that it is unacceptable in that regard.
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