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Where is it best to do some workout ?

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I think that it depends on the person.
In my case, I prefer outdoors rather than indoors like a fitness center.
I sometimes go to the fitness center in my apartment during the cold winter and use the treadmill to exercise, but I don't get personal training from a professional trainer like my two daughters.
Instead, I enjoy riding a bike on the bike lanes built along the river and playing golf on the fields, from spring to fall.
Outdoor exercise is good because it is not as stuffy as indoor exercise, and I can enjoy the scenery outside and fresh air.
In particular, riding a bike relieves stress and clears my mind when I move at a fast speed.

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Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, it's true. It actually differs from person to person.
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I think that it depends on the person.
>>Correct
OR: That might be a matter of personal preference.
In my case, I prefer outdoors rather than indoors like a fitness center.
>>Correct
OR: Personally, I prefer the outdoors over indoor spaces like fitness centers.
I sometimes go to the fitness center in my apartment during the cold winter and use the treadmill to exercise, but I don't get personal training from a professional trainer like my two daughters.
>>Correct
OR: I sometimes go to the fitness center in my apartment during the cold winter and use the treadmill to exercise, but unlike my two daughters, I don't get personal training from a professional trainer.
Instead, I enjoy riding a bike on the bike lanes built along the river and playing golf on the fields, from spring to fall.
>>Correct
OR: I'd rather ride by bike on the riverfront bike lanes and play golf on the course from spring to fall.
Outdoor exercise is good because it is not as stuffy as indoor exercise, and I can enjoy the scenery outside and fresh air.
>>Correct
OR: Exercising outdoors is refreshing because it's less stuffy than working out indoors, and I can enjoy the fresh air and scenery.
In particular, riding a bike relieves stress and clears my mind when I move at a fast speed.
>>Correct
OR: Riding a bike, especially at high speed, helps me relieve stress and clear my mind.
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