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2025.04.01 homework!

작성자: 이*준
2025-04-02 410

회원님의 영작문

Each sentence given below contains one or more grammar mistakes. Correct the mistakes and rewrite the sentences.

1. Although she was unhappy but she said nothing. : Although she was unhappy, she said nothing.
2. Because of I liked him, I tried to help him. : Because I liked hi, I tried to help him
3. Because I liked him, so I helped him. : Because I liked him and I helped him
4. So you know, I work very hard. : As you know I work very hard
5. As you know that I like him very much. : As you know I like him very much.
6. We came back because of we were short of cash. : We came back because we were short of cash.
7. I have got a friend whom works in a pub. : I have got a friend who works in a pub
8. She always thanks me for all the help that I give her it. : She always thanks me for all the help to give her it.
9. Because she was depressed and didn’t know what to do. : She was depressed and didn't know what to do.
10. Cook slowly unless ready. : Cook slowly until ready.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there(^^,)


I am really glad that you are doing your best in studying.

I know that you are tired so please rest well.

If you have any concerns about our topic today please feel free to ask.

Be sincere and humble always.

 

Have a great day!

Take care always.

T. Jeny


1. Although she was unhappy but she said nothing. : Although she was unhappy, she said nothing.
>>Correct
2. Because of I liked him, I tried to help him. : Because I liked him, I tried to help him
>>Correct
3. Because I liked him, so I helped him. : Because I liked him and I helped him
>> Because I liked him, I helped him.
4. So you know, I work very hard. : As you know I work very hard
>>Correct
5. As you know that I like him very much. : As you know I like him very much.
>>Correct
6. We came back because of we were short of cash. : We came back because we were short of cash.
>>Correct
7. I have got a friend whom works in a pub. : I have got a friend who works in a pub
>>Correct
8. She always thanks me for all the help that I give her it. : She always thanks me for all the help to give her it.
>>Correct
9. Because she was depressed and didn’t know what to do. : She was depressed and didn't know what to do.
>>Correct
10. Cook slowly unless ready. : Cook slowly until ready.
>>Correct
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