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The severity of bullying varies and is subjective. So attackers always say it is just a part of growing up, but victims see it as a crime. I think we should focus on the victims' perspectives because attackers can¡¯t truly understand how they feel.
If it¡¯s just a fight between friends, it could be considered a part of growing up. They need to talk it out and reconcile, learning something from the experience. But if it¡¯s one-sided bullying, it should be seen as a crime. Attackers should reflect on their actions and apologize to the victims. Forgiveness is entirely up to the victims.

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Hello Yumin,


It is important to make an effort to step forward in learning new things so that we can apply it our daily life.

T. Jeny


The severity of bullying varies and is subjective.
>>correct
 So attackers always say it is just a part of growing up, but victims see it as a crime.
>>correct
 I think we should focus on the victims' perspectives because attackers can¡¯t truly understand how they feel.
>>correct
If it¡¯s just a fight between friends, it could be considered a part of growing up.
>>correct
 They need to talk it out and reconcile, learning something from the experience. 
>>correct
But if it¡¯s one-sided bullying, it should be seen as a crime. 
>>correct
Attackers should reflect on their actions and apologize to the victims.
>>correct
 Forgiveness is entirely up to the victims.
>>correct
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