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Talk about something that you\'ve been planning to do but keep putting off.

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There are do many things I have planned to do but haven't done yet.
To be honest, I like to make plans before doing anything and I've been doing my best to put them into practice, but I've always been able to do only some of them.
I don't like that about me.
I made a New Year's resolution at the beginning of this year.
My New Year's resolutions include visiting my parents every month, studying English every day, studying stock investment, studying real estate auctions, and going to a performance with my daughters every month.
Of those, I haven't even started studying real estate auctions yet, and I haven't been able to see a performance even once in the past three months.
Real estate auctions are a good way to make money, and going to a performance is something I thought of to make good memories with my daughters.
So, I will start to study real estate autions from this month. and I am thinking of talking with my daughters about going to a performance in this month.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Soon Ho^^
Thank you for sharing.
You should really do something about those plans.
_T. SHAY^^
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There are do many things I have planned to do but haven't done yet.
>>There are many things I have planned to do but haven't done yet.
To be honest, I like to make plans before doing anything and I've been doing my best to put them into practice, but I've always been able to do only some of them.
>>Correct
OR: Honestly, I prefer to plan ahead before doing anything, and I always ty my best to carry out my plans, but I've only been able to accomplish some of them.
I don't like that about me.
>>Correct
OR: I hate that about myself.
I made a New Year's resolution at the beginning of this year.
>>Correct
OR: I even wrote down my New Year's resolution at the beginning of this year.
My New Year's resolutions include visiting my parents every month, studying English every day, studying stock investment, studying real estate auctions, and going to a performance with my daughters every month.
>>Correct
OR: My goals for the new year include visiting my parents once a month, studying English every day, learning about stock investing, researching real estate auctions, and attending a performance with my daughters each month.
Of those, I haven't even started studying real estate auctions yet, and I haven't been able to see a performance even once in the past three months.
>>Correct
OR: Among my resolutions, I still haven't started studying real estate auctions, and I haven't attended a single performance in the past three months.
Real estate auctions are a good way to make money, and going to a performance is something I thought of to make good memories with my daughters.
>>Correct
OR: Investing in real estate auctions is a good way to earn money, while going to performances is something I thought of to create lasting memories with my daughters.
So, I will start to study real estate autions from this month. 
>>So I will start to study real estate auctions from this month.
OR: I've decided to start studying real estate auctions this month.
and I am thinking of talking with my daughters about going to a performance in this month.
>>And I'm thinking of talking with my daughters about going to a performance this month.
OR: And I'm considering discussing with my daughters the idea of going to a performance.
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