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At what age do people usually get married in your country? What do you think is a good age to marry?

>> People usually get married at from 26 to 35 these days. The age that people deserve old enough to marry is getting increasing continuously. In the case of my grandparents, they got married at 18. But my cousin didn't get married until now, even though she is 32 years old. So my grandma accelerate my cousin to marry whenever they encounter ¤»¤»¤».

Late 20s is a age time when I wanted to marry because I was always satisfied my mom's young age compared to my friends' parents' age. My mom got married at 24 and got me at 25. She was always the youngest mom in school parents party. Remembering my memory, I also want to be a young father for my child. Being a good father is another problem¤»¤».

There is no good age to marry. If you have a wanted age to marry, it will be a good age. Unless, The age when you think you pick good partner and have some budget is answer because it has no answer.

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Hi, Jun!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

At what age do people usually get married in your country? What do you think is a good age to marry?

>> People usually get married at from 26 to 35 these days. 
>> People usually get married from 26 to 35 these days. 
The age that people deserve old enough to marry is getting increasing continuously. 
>> The age that people deserve to marry is old enough, and it's increasing continuously. 
In the case of my grandparents, they got married at 18. 
>> CORRECT!
But my cousin didn't get married until now, even though she is 32 years old. 
>> CORRECT!
So my grandma accelerate my cousin to marry whenever they encounter ¤»¤»¤».
>> So my grandma encourages my cousin to marry whenever they encounter ¤»¤»¤».

Late 20s is a age time when I wanted to marry because I was always satisfied my mom's young age compared to my friends' parents' age. 
>> Late 20s is the age that I want to get married because I was always satisfied by my mom's young age compared to my friends' parents' age. 
My mom got married at 24 and got me at 25. 
>> CORRECT!
She was always the youngest mom in school parents party. 
>> CORRECT!
Remembering my memory, I also want to be a young father for my child. 
>> CORRECT!
Being a good father is another problem¤»¤».
>> CORRECT!

There is no good age to marry. 
>> CORRECT!
If you have a wanted age to marry, it will be a good age. 
>> If you have an ideal age to get married, it will be a good age. 
Unless, The age when you think you pick good partner and have some budget is answer because it has no answer.
>> Unless, The age when you think you picked a good partner and have some budget is the answer because it has no answer.
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