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What courses or subjects do you think should be added in school?

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I think we have to learn about human from young.
We don't know oneself so should teach in school.
Also we should study classic,art,literature and music.
It's very important our life and influence.
I believe we can only see as much as we know.
Every human being is different.
I wish that all student would learn various view.

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Hello, Ms. Ju Mi! I completely agree with you. These disciplines open up different perspectives, helping individuals understand not just the world around them, but also themselves.
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I think we have to learn about human from young.
>>I think we need to learn about humanity from a young age.
We don't know oneself so should teach in school.
>>We don¡¯t fully know ourselves, so this should be taught in schools.
Also we should study classic,art,literature and music.
>>Also, we should study the classics, art, literature, and music.
It's very important our life and influence.
>>These are very important in our lives and have a big influence.
I believe we can only see as much as we know.
>> Correct!
Every human being is different.
>>Correct!
I wish that all student would learn various view.
>>I wish that all students could learn various perspectives.
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