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Is there legal behavior in your country that you think should be made illegal?

-Answer: I believe that cyberbullying needs to be legally regulated.
Many people suffer and are in pain due to online harassment and malicious comments. It seems especially harsh for celebrities. Recently, there have been cases where some celebrities have committed suicide due to malicious comments. Cyberbullying, including these incidents, definitely requires strong legal regulation.

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Hello, Ms. Nara! I agree with you wholeheartedly. Cyberbullying has become a serious issue, and its impact can be devastating, especially when it leads to such tragic outcomes. It's incredibly important to protect individuals from online harassment and malicious behavior. 
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I believe that cyberbullying needs to be legally regulated.
>>Correct!
Many people suffer and are in pain due to online harassment and malicious comments. 
>>Correct!
It seems especially harsh for celebrities. 
>>Correct!
Recently, there have been cases where some celebrities have committed suicide due to malicious comments. 
>>Correct!
OR. Recently, there have been cases where some celebrities have taken their own lives due to malicious comments.
Cyberbullying, including these incidents, definitely requires strong legal regulation.
>> Correct!
OR. Cyberbullying, including these tragic incidents, clearly requires strong legal regulation.
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