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If you could learn how to cook a new dish, what would it be and why?

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2025-04-09 1228

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I'm interested in baking these days. That's why I want to learn how to make macarons.
I like macarons among the kinds of desserts, and one of them, I like fat macarons that are filed with filling cream between corks.
However, not only are there not many places selling fat macarons, but also the prices of raw ingredients such as flour and milk have risen, making it quite expensive to buy and eat.
That's why if I can make macarons, I can not only eat macarons without any price burden, but I also want to make my own macarons filed with my favorite ingredients and things I like.

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Hi,

Thank you for sharing your answer. 
That would be lovely to learn how to make macarons. 
I hope that you will get the chance to learn it soon. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina


I'm interested in baking these days. That's why I want to learn how to make macarons.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I'm into baking these days so I want to learn how to make macarons.

I like macarons among the kinds of desserts, and one of them, I like fat macarons that are filed with filling cream between corks.
>>  I like macarons among all kinds of desserts, especially fatc macarons, which are filled with cream between thick cookies.

However, not only are there not many places selling fat macarons, but also the prices of raw ingredients such as flour and milk have risen, making it quite expensive to buy and eat.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: However, not only are there few places that sell fat macarons, but the prices of ingredients like flour and milk have also gone up, making them quite expensive.

That's why if I can make macarons, I can not only eat macarons without any price burden, but I also want to make my own macarons filed with my favorite ingredients and things I like.
>> That¡¯s why, if I learn to make macarons, I can enjoy them without worrying about the cost. I also want to create my own versions filled with my favorite ingredients and flavors.
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