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Do you like purchasing items or goods ahead of time?

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I don't like purchasing items or goods ahead of time. But I open think about to purchase ahead of time. Because I like to prepare ahead of time. For example next month is parents day, I think that I should buy gift for my mother and mother in low. What does she need? Sometimes I discuss with my husband. Sometimes I ask her what you need? But mother always say 'I don' t need anything'. So we give her some money. Than my mother l like it. The best gift is cash.

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Ms. Eva!
How are you? There are pros and cons of purchasing items ahead of time; however, it would depend on the occasion. Like what you mentioned, about your mother-in-law. Yes, I guess for her age, she doesn't like anything such as clothes or shoes because she thinks she is already old, and when we give her some money, they would gladly accept it.
Anyway, presents or gifts are meant to make people happy. Whatever the form of your gift, it would give someone a reason to smile and be happy!
Aki~


I don't like purchasing items or goods ahead of time.
>> CORRECT!

But I open think about to purchase ahead of time.
>> But I often think about purchasing ahead of time.

Because I like to prepare ahead of time.
>> CORRECT!

For example next month is parents day, I think that I should buy gift for my mother and mother in low.
>> For example, next month is parents' day, I think that I should buy a gift for my mother and mother-in-law.

What does she need? Sometimes I discuss with my husband.
>> CORRECT!

Sometimes I ask her what you need?
>> I sometimes ask her what she needs.

But mother always say 'I don' t need anything'. So we give her some money.
>> But mother always says that she doesn't need anything. So we give her some money.

Than my mother l like it. 
>> Then my mother likes it.

The best gift is cash.
>> CORRECT!
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