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Writing task: How do you feel when you receive flowers from someone?
I'm very happy when I received flowers.
I want to express my mood with other word but I can't think of anything except for "happy".
I got the flowers for my parents, friends at the graduation ceremony.
I felt that l did well in shcool and I appreciate to them. Also I promised to give flowers when they are graduated.
I saw the saying "It's too hard to bloom for plant, so giving flower means that encouraging the difficulites and pains experienced to reach the goal."
I got a deep impress this saying.

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Hello, Ms. Lina! If you¡¯re looking for other words to express your mood, you could try "grateful," "elated," "touched," "overjoyed," or "moved." They can capture different aspects of that deep happiness and appreciation you felt. 
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I'm very happy when I received flowers.
>>I'm very happy when I receive flowers.
I want to express my mood with other word but I can't think of anything except for "happy".
>>I want to express my mood in other words, but I can't think of anything except "happy."
I got the flowers for my parents, friends at the graduation ceremony.
>>I got flowers from my parents and friends at the graduation ceremony.
I felt that l did well in shcool and I appreciate to them. 
>>I felt that I had done well in school, and I appreciate them.
Also I promised to give flowers when they are graduated.
>>AI also promised to give them flowers when they graduate.
I saw the saying "It's too hard to bloom for plant, so giving flower means that encouraging the difficulites and pains experienced to reach the goal."
>>I saw a saying: "It's too hard to bloom for a plant, so giving flowers means encouraging the difficulties and pains experienced to reach the goal."
I got a deep impress this saying.
>>I was deeply impressed by this saying.
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