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What is your favorite foreign food, and why do you like it? Do you have any information about that f

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I have gone many country. They have them's foods. I feel something was very delicious. But I could't eat something. For example I couldn't eat coriander in China. It feel likes cosmetics. And when I went to africa, I couldn't eat their foods. Because they smelled something weird. I like foreign foods without this foods. But I feel not that special. Because I can eat it here. I didn't go India, but I like curry and Naan. Sometimes my family go India restaurant. There is India chef, he made us curry. I feel very delicious.

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Ms. Eva!
How are you? I appreciate your effort in expressing your thoughts through writing. 
There are certain foods that we really enjoy. In my case, I love Korean and other Asian foods. I am curious about Turkey's baklava ( It is one of their famous dessert). I hope I will be able to try it one time.
See you in class!
Aki~


I have gone many country.
>>> I have gone to many countries.

They have them's foods.
>>> They have their traditional foods

I feel something was very delicious. But I could't eat something.
>>> Some are delicious, but there are foods that I couldn't eat

For example I couldn't eat coriander in China. It feel likes cosmetics.
>>>  For example, I couldn't eat coriander in China because it tastes like cosmetics.

And when I went to africa, I couldn't eat their foods. Because they smelled something weird.
>>>  And when I went to Africa, I couldn't eat their food either because it smelled weird.

I like foreign foods without this foods. But I feel not that special. Because I can eat it here. I didn't go India, but I like curry and Naan.
>>> I like foreign foods without these foods,  but I don't feel that special. because I can eat it here. I don't need to go to  India to have curry and Naan, which I like.

Sometimes my family go India restaurant. There is India chef, he made us curry. I feel very delicious.
>>> Sometimes my family goes to an Indian restaurant. There is an Indian chef, he made us curry and it tastes very delicious.

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