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I want a warm and cozy room.
I like wood tones and ivory colors.
I want to put many plants in the room.
I also want a big wooden bookshelf.
I¡¯ll decorate it with books and small pots.

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Hi Isabel. Your description paints a beautiful picture of a peaceful, nature-inspired space. The combination of warm wood, soft ivory tones, and greenery sounds very relaxing. You clearly know what kind of environment makes you feel comfortable and happy, which is wonderful to see in your writing. Keep expressing your thoughts like this. It¡¯s both clear and heartwarming.

~ T. Lia

I want a warm and cozy room.
>> CORRECT or
>> I want my room to feel warm and cozy.

I like wood tones and ivory colors.
>> CORRECT

I want to put many plants in the room.
>> I want to fill the room with lots of plants.

I also want a big wooden bookshelf.
>> CORRECT

I¡¯ll decorate it with books and small pots.
>> CORRECT or
>> I¡¯ll decorate it with books and little plant pots.

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