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Why do you think some people are afraid of the hospital?

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Because the drama and movie can escribe very scaring to hospital and mediacl issue.
Many people watch SNS and drama but it can be caused people feeling afriad of the hospital.
Another reason is many people scared to inject becuase it be formed sharp and long.
For example, when i go to the hosiptal to care my healthy problem, the doctor says "you should take inject now" then i feel very scared and tremble with fear. I think many people same as me.

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Hi, Chloe!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille

Because the drama and movie can escribe very scaring to hospital and mediacl issue.
>> Many people are afraid of going to the hospital it's because of what they see from dramas and movies that describe very scary hospital and medical issues.
Many people watch SNS and drama but it can be caused people feeling afriad of the hospital.
>> Many people watch SNS videos and dramas, causing them to feel afraid of the hospital.
Another reason is many people scared to inject becuase it be formed sharp and long.
>> Another reason is that many people are scared of injections or needles because it's long and sharp.
For example, when i go to the hosiptal to care my healthy problem, the doctor says "you should take inject now" then i feel very scared and tremble with fear. 
>> For example, when I go to the hospital to care for my health, the doctor would say "we need to inject on you now", then I feel very scared and tremble with fear. 
I think many people same as me.
>> I think many people are the same as me.
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