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What are the things you want to enjoy during weekends?

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Well, I usually worked during the week, so I just wanted to enjoy resting on weekends.
But this weekend, I want to be active rather than resting still.
First of all, I want to follow the recipe while looking at the baking books I'm interested in these days. There is a quite big oven in the house where my family lives, and I think it would be nice to make a lot of things by making a lot of dough.
Also, I want to go to the bookstore after a long time.
Not only do I like quiet places, but I also like books, so bookstores are the best place for me. I couldn't go to a bookstore because I was working at a company, but I want to go to a bookstore to recharge my stamina and refresh my mood on the weekend.

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Hello, 

Thank you for submitting your answer. 
I hope that you will be able to enjoy this kind of weekend.
Doing what you like and enjoying it is really precious. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina




Well, I usually worked during the week, so I just wanted to enjoy resting on weekends.
>> Well, I usually work during the week, so I just want to enjoy resting on weekends.

But this weekend, I want to be active rather than resting still.
>> But this weekend, I want to be active rather than just resting.

First of all, I want to follow the recipe while looking at the baking books I'm interested in these days. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: First, I want to try some recipes from the baking books I¡¯ve been interested in lately.

There is a quite big oven in the house where my family lives, and I think it would be nice to make a lot of things by making a lot of dough.
>> There¡¯s quite a big oven at my family¡¯s house, and I think it would be nice to bake a lot using a big batch of dough.

Also, I want to go to the bookstore after a long time.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I also want to visit a bookstore, since it¡¯s been a long time.

Not only do I like quiet places, but I also like books, so bookstores are the best place for me. 
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I like both quiet places and books, so bookstores are perfect for me.

I couldn't go to a bookstore because I was working at a company, but I want to go to a bookstore to recharge my stamina and refresh my mood on the weekend.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Work kept me from visiting the bookstore, but I¡¯m hoping to go this weekend to unwind and lift my mood.
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