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How I deal with the problems depend on the aspects of the problems.
When the matter is simple and it is irrelevant which way I use to solve it, I prefer to solve the problem as quickly as I can. Keeping those kind of troubles bother me and I can't sleep well if I don't fix it.
On the other hand, if the problem is complicated, I tend to sleep on with it. It's true that my sleeping quality will decrease, but in this case I believe it's worth it. Process of contemplating about the circumstance again and simulating situations applying all sorts of solution is essential for this. So having enough time and having a long break such as sleeping are necessary for dealing with complex issues.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! Hour approach is quite healthy and balanced. If anything, the only caution might be to ensure that overthinking doesn't lead to paralysis when facing complex problems—but even that seems like something you're managing well by eventually acting after resting on it.
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How I deal with the problems depend on the aspects of the problems.
>>How I deal with problems depends on the nature of the issue.

When the matter is simple and it is irrelevant which way I use to solve it, I prefer to solve the problem as quickly as I can. 
>>When the matter is simple and it doesn¡¯t really matter how I solve it, I prefer to handle it as quickly as possible.
Keeping those kind of troubles bother me and I can't sleep well if I don't fix it.
>>Keeping those kinds of troubles bothers me, and I can't sleep well if I don't resolve them.
On the other hand, if the problem is complicated, I tend to sleep on with it. 
>>On the other hand, if the problem is complicated, I tend to sleep on it.
It's true that my sleeping quality will decrease, but in this case I believe it's worth it. 
>>It¡¯s true that my sleep quality might suffer, but in that case, I believe it¡¯s worth it.

Process of contemplating about the circumstance again and simulating situations applying all sorts of solution is essential for this. 
>>Taking time to reflect on the situation and simulate different solutions is an essential part of the process.
So having enough time and having a long break such as sleeping are necessary for dealing with complex issues.
>>So, having enough time and a long break, like sleeping, is necessary for dealing with more complex issues.



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