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I don't have a fixed time for coffee in my daily life. I drink coffee when I need it or I crave it.
Usually in morning class, it is hard to concentrate on the class because I feel drowsy. Coffee is almost a medicine that is indispensable to focus at that time. I also demand coffee when I have to stay up late. It helps me to wake up for a longer time compared to when I endure without any chemical assist.
The moment I crave for it is when I eat lots of sweet things. Desserts are tasty, but eating too much of them makes me sick. Drinking coffee at that very instant, lets my mouth to be neutralized. I get to feel as if I haven't eat any sweet things and I can't eat more of them any amount. This can be seemed like a side effect, because having more desserts without alert can lead to gaining weight, but to me it's unquestionably an advantage.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! I¡¯d say your coffee habit is pretty balanced—it¡¯s flexible, intentional, and tuned in to your lifestyle. Just curious, do you have a favorite type of coffee or a go-to café drink?
-T. Sonny
I don't have a fixed time for coffee in my daily life. 
>>I don't have a fixed time for drinking coffee in my daily life.
I drink coffee when I need it or I crave it.
>>I drink it when I need it or when I crave it.

Usually in morning class, it is hard to concentrate on the class because I feel drowsy.
>>Usually, during morning classes, it's hard to concentrate because I feel drowsy.
Coffee is almost a medicine that is indispensable to focus at that time. 
>>At that time, coffee feels almost like medicine that is indispensable for helping me focus.

I also demand coffee when I have to stay up late. 
>>I also reach for coffee when I have to stay up late.
It helps me to wake up for a longer time compared to when I endure without any chemical assist.
>>It helps me stay awake much longer than if I tried to endure without any chemical assistance.

The moment I crave for it is when I eat lots of sweet things. 
>>Another moment I crave coffee is after eating a lot of sweets.
Desserts are tasty, but eating too much of them makes me sick. 
>>Correct!
Drinking coffee at that very instant, lets my mouth to be neutralized. 
>>Drinking coffee at that very instant helps neutralize the sweetness in my mouth.

I get to feel as if I haven't eat any sweet things and I can't eat more of them any amount.
>>It makes me feel as if I haven¡¯t eaten anything sweet, and strangely, I find that I can eat even more desserts afterward.
This can be seemed like a side effect, because having more desserts without alert can lead to gaining weight, but to me it's unquestionably an advantage.
>>This might seem like a side effect because having more desserts without realizing it can lead to weight gain, but to me, it¡¯s unquestionably an advantage.
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