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What\\\'s more important to you when you travel - comfort and relaxation, or stimulating new experie

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It is important both comfort and experiences.
Traveling stimulate about variety new place,food,different looking people I haven\'t tried before.
There are a lot of tings.
Come to think of it,I prefer new experiences.

Thanks for bringing your A-game today! Have a fantastic weekend~
Hi sonny I am not sure this A - game ,what is mean?
Have a good weekend~~

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Hello, Ms. Jumi! Nice thoughts! You're trying to express the balance between comfort and experiences, and how travel can enrich your life. It also shows that you value growth and learning. Every time you experience something new, you're expanding your perspective, and not everyone is willing to do that.
-T. Sonny
It is important both comfort and experiences.
>>Both comfort and new experiences are important.
Traveling stimulate about variety new place,food,different looking people I haven't tried before.
>>Traveling stimulates me with a variety of new places, foods, and people who look different from those I'm used to.
There are a lot of tings.
>>There are so many things to explore.
Come to think of it,I prefer new experiences.
>>Come to think of it, I prefer new experiences.
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