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Describe a famous person, such as an athlete, actor, or singer. Describe their appearance.

작성자: 박*호
2025-04-23 558

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I'm not very good at drawing or making things, and I didn't like art classes when I was in school, so it would be hard for me to describe someone's appearance.
I chose a very famous person who is familiar to you, so you will understand what I am describing about him.
He is Rodrigo Duterte, former President of the Philippines.
I searched and found his pictures online and printed them out. And I'm describing him while looking at the pictures.
His first impression is that he looks very strong like an athlete.
But I know that, contrary to his impression, he majored in law and was a lawyer.
His face looks confident. And he has brown skin and short black hair. And he doesn't seem to be very tall and handsome.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Mr. Park^^
Thank you for sharing.
I don't think you need to be interested in art to be able to describe someone. 
It's just my thought though.
I wish you described someone I don't know though.
It would be better that way since I can check weather I can fully understand how you describe that person.
This activity is not for me. It's for you to practice expressing your thoughts.
_T. SHAY^^
***

I'm not very good at drawing or making things, and I didn't like art classes when I was in school, so it would be hard for me to describe someone's appearance.
>>Correct
OR: I am not good at things related to art, so I am not sure if I can describe someone's appearance well.

I chose a very famous person who is familiar to you, so you will understand what I am describing about him.
>>Correct
OR: I chose a famous person whom you are familiar with, so you can understand what I am describing about him.

He is Rodrigo Duterte, former President of the Philippines.
>>He is Rodrigo Duterte, the former president of the Philippines.
I searched and found his pictures online and printed them out. 
>>Correct
OR: I searched for his pictures online and printed them out. 

And I'm describing him while looking at the pictures.
>>Correct
His first impression is that he looks very strong like an athlete.
>>My first impression of him is that he looks very strong like an athlete.
But I know that, contrary to his impression, he majored in law and was a lawyer.
>> But I know that, contrary to this impression, he majored in law and was a lawyer.
His face looks confident. 
>>He looks confident.
OR: He has a confident look on his face.

And he has brown skin and short black hair. 
>>Correct
OR: He has a brown complexion and short black hair.
And he doesn't seem to be very tall and handsome.
>>Correct
OR: Also, he doesn't seem to be tall and handsome.
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