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What\'s the most famous major body of water. Write some facts about it.

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I think the most famous major body of water is south china sea because south china sea is start the fight china with southest Asian country.
So south china sea is very most famous major body of water.

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I think the most famous major body of water is south china sea because south china sea is start the fight china with southest Asian country.
So south china sea is very most famous major body of water.
>> I think the most famous major body of water is the South China Sea because it has been the center of conflicts between China and Southeast Asian countries. So, the South China Sea is a very famous major body of water.
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