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The thing that makes me reget occurs when I'm too excited. Sometimes I reveal others' secrets or my weakness. And I talk too much to make other people funny. Then that night, I always think about that and regret telling something or talking too much.
And I regret that I didn't study English hard when I was young. I think I was good at English when I was 7~8 years old. I could pronounce like a native speaker, but I felt shy when I pronounced like that. I used to think that looked like bragging. So I pronounced awkward intentionally and unfortunately it makes me really awkward. If I could go back that time, I would try to study english hard!!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Megan^^
Yeah! That's really a tough situation. 
Regretting something but also knowing that we can't unsay things that were already said. 
Anyway, I believe it's something we can work on.
_T. SHAY^^
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The thing that makes me reget occurs when I'm too excited. 
>>The thing that makes me regret occurs when I'm too excited.
OR: I usually make things that I would later regret when I'm too excited.
Sometimes I reveal others' secrets or my weakness. 
>>Sometimes I reveal others' secrets or my weaknesses.
OR: Sometimes I intentionally reveal others' secrets or even my own weaknesses.
And I talk too much to make other people funny. 
>>And I talk too much to make other people laugh.
Then that night, I always think about that and regret telling something or talking too much.
>>Correct
OR: During the night, I usually have flashbacks of the things I said and regret saying it.
And I regret that I didn't study English hard when I was young. 
>>Correct
OR: One more thing, I regret that I didn't study English hard when I was young.
I think I was good at English when I was 7~8 years old. 
>>Correct
OR: I think I was a better English speaker when I was around 7 to 8 years old.
I could pronounce like a native speaker, but I felt shy when I pronounced like that. 
>>Correct
OR: I could speak like a native speaker, but I didn't have the confidence to show it to other people.
I used to think that looked like bragging. 
>>I used to think that it would look like I'm bragging.
So I pronounced awkward intentionally and unfortunately it makes me really awkward. 
>>So, I intentionally pronounced words awkwardly which made me really awkward.
If I could go back that time, I would try to study english hard!!
>>If I could go back to that time, I would try to study English hard!

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