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If you could learn something new (anything), what would it be and why?

작성자: 이*윤
2025-04-28 1034

회원님의 영작문

I like to learn new things.
I have become interested in other languages these days. So, I want to learn a new language. In particular, I am interested in Chinese, Japanese, Thai, and Spanish.
I learned Chinese and Japanese a little when I was in high school, but I haven't learned them since them, so I only know the basics. I have never learned Thai and Spanish, so I don't know all of them.
These languages are also related to my hobbies, and I like watching dramas and movies from all over the world, but as I kept watching, I was interested and I wanted to know the language in order to enjoy dramas and movies more interestingly.
On the contrary, Spanish is a case where I became interested in the pronunciation and sound, but I became more interested when I heard their speak.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi! 

Thank you for sharing your interest in learning new languages. It's nice to know that you are eager to learn about them. 
It is nice to know and understand other languages, as it helps us understand others more and also enjoy the entertainment they offer. ^^ 

~ Teacher Gina




I like to learn new things.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I'm always eager to learn something new.

I have become interested in other languages these days.  So, I want to learn a new language.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Lately, I’ve developed an interest in different languages and would like to study a new one.

In particular, I am interested in Chinese, Japanese, Thai, and Spanish.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I'm especially interested in Chinese, Japanese, Thai, and Spanish.

I learned Chinese and Japanese a little when I was in high school, but I haven't learned them since them, so I only know the basics. 
>> I learned Chinese and Japanese a little when I was in high school, but I haven't learned them since then, so I only know the basics. 

I have never learned Thai and Spanish, so I don't know all of them.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: I’ve never studied Thai or Spanish, so I don’t know anything about them.

These languages are also related to my hobbies, and I like watching dramas and movies from all over the world, but as I kept watching, I was interested and I wanted to know the language in order to enjoy dramas and movies more interestingly.
>> CORRECT.
>> Or: Watching dramas and movies from different countries sparked my interest in learning the languages to understand and appreciate them deeper.

On the contrary, Spanish is a case where I became interested in the pronunciation and sound, but I became more interested when I heard their speak.
>> In contrast, my interest in Spanish started with its pronunciation and sound, and I became even more interested when I heard people speaking it.
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