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Reaching my ambitious is the best way to raise my self respect.
It makes my mind strong even if someone hurt my emotion.
But there are also bad side, too.
If I don't try to hard to achieve it or it is not realistic I could be frustrated and stressful.
It would be the motivation to do my best.

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Good morning, Sunny!
Can you imagine a life without a goal? It's like living without a sense of direction.
Our ambitions and goals push us to move forward in a careful way to achieve them. We may be in a haste, and if we fail, we learn from it and keep going. That is life, no matter how high the hurdle is, we have to jump high to overcome the obstacle and be able to reach the finish line- our goal.
Have a blessed day!
Aki~

Reaching my ambitious is the best way to raise my self respect.
>>> Reaching my ambition is the best way to raise my self-respect.

It makes my mind strong even if someone hurt my emotion.
>>> It makes my mind strong even if someone hurts my emotions.

But there are also bad side, too.
>>> But there are also bad sides, too.

If I don't try to hard to achieve it or it is not realistic I could be frustrated and stressful.
>>> If I don't try too hard to achieve it or it is not realistic, I could be frustrated and stressed.

It would be the motivation to do my best.
>>> CORRECT!
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