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Since founded our company, We start mass production step for the first time. For now, our solution have to embedded our customer devices and AI systems such as industrial PC, on-premise server, smart camera module and so on. 
>>  Since founded our company, we started the mass production step for the first time. For now, our solution have to be embedded to our customer devices and AI systems such as the industrial PC, on-premise server, smart camera module, and so on. 

we have checked the heat generation, power consumption, reliable and durable thought quality test. And we have delivered Software Development Kit (SDK) to customer who bought our hardware ( AI semiconductor). 
>> We have checked the heat generation, power consumption, reliable and durable thought quality test. And we have delivered Software Development Kit (SDK) to customers who bought our hardware ( AI semiconductor). Very good sentences!

It is very important that customer use conveniently. In many cases at customer service, there ware SDK problems. We have developed and updated SDK package.
>> It is very important that customers use it conveniently. In many cases in customer service, there ware SDK problems. We have developed and updated the SDK package.
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