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What would you do if a neighbor is partying until the wee hours?

작성자: 이*희
2025-05-08 355

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I never seen neighbor doing the party. My neighbor is almost old people. But if I see this situation, I can't allowed it. I think that anyone don't have to disturb neighbor's rest time, either for their fun. I heard at news that neighbor fighted at the some village. Because they were party untill wee hours. They were very loud, and lighted lit. So neighbor could't sleep. Neighbor asked to be quiet, but they could't do it. Neighbor was very angry, so reported to the police.
I think that we have to keep our manners and don't have to do damage to other people.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Happy Friday, Ms. Eva!
I understand this situation. Did you know that my city has a "Silent Night Ordinance"? People are not supposed to create loud noises after 10 pm. (except Christmas and New Year, of course). If a neighbor is still noisy after that hour, we can just remind them that it's past 10 pm, and if they don't listen, we can call the police, and most people don't like to do that since it is bothersome.
Thank you for answering your homework. See you next week :)
Aki~

I never seen neighbor doing the party.
>>> I have never seen my neighbor doing the party.
 
My neighbor is almost old people. But if I see this situation, I can't allowed it.
>>>  My neighbors are almost old people, and if I see this situation, I won't allow it.

I think that anyone don't have to disturb neighbor's rest time, either for their fun.
>>>   I think that no one has to disturb their neighbor's rest time, either for their fun.

I heard at news that neighbor fighted at the some village. Because they were party untill wee hours.
>>> I heard on the news that in a village, some neighbors fought because they were partying until the wee hours.

They were very loud, and lighted lit. So neighbor could't sleep.
>>>  They were very loud and had bright lights on, so the neighbor couldn't sleep.

Neighbor asked to be quiet, but they could't do it. Neighbor was very angry, so reported to the police.
>>> The neighbor asked them to be quiet, but they couldn't do it, so he got very angry, and they reported to the police.

I think that we have to keep our manners and don't have to do damage to other people.
>>>  I think that we have to keep our manners and not disturb other people.
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