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The best birthday gift that I have ever received is a blue watch. I got this watch when I was about 9 years old. At that time I only have worn childish watch that I craved for watch which seemed more like an adult. For some reason I had thought the watch that adults wore seemed more cool, even though children's watch had more attractive cartoon character on it.
The reason this is the best present is because I had worn it for about 13 years since then. I was attached to that watch and I especially liked the clear blue color of it. This watch is the definitely the gift that I used for a longest time and also frequently during that long period.
I eventually throw it away last year because its band was worn down too much to wear it more. However, it's still the best gift in my mind.

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Hello, Ms. WooIn! Thirteen years is such a long time to keep something! That alone says so much about how meaningful the gift was to you. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny
The best birthday gift that I have ever received is a blue watch. 
>>The best birthday gift I have ever received is a blue watch.
I got this watch when I was about 9 years old. 
>>Correct!
At that time I only have worn childish watch that I craved for watch which seemed more like an adult. 
>>At that time, I had only worn childish watches, and I really wanted one that looked more like something an adult would wear.
For some reason I had thought the watch that adults wore seemed more cool, even though children's watch had more attractive cartoon character on it.
>>For some reason, I thought adult watches seemed cooler, even though kids' watches had more attractive cartoon characters on them.
The reason this is the best present is because I had worn it for about 13 years since then. 
>>This gift is the best because I wore it for about 13 years after that.
I was attached to that watch and I especially liked the clear blue color of it. 
>>I was very attached to that watch, and I especially liked its clear blue color.
This watch is the definitely the gift that I used for a longest time and also frequently during that long period.
>>It was definitely the gift I used the longest and the most frequently during that period.

I eventually throw it away last year because its band was worn down too much to wear it more. 
>>I eventually threw it away last year because its band was too worn out to wear anymore.
However, it's still the best gift in my mind.
>>Correct
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