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Is animation only for childeren? why or why not?

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My answer about that question is not.
Producers Making animation films are adults and my friends including me are loving the kind of flims.
Also, Threre are virious kinds of animations. Some animations are more loved by adults than kidsl For example, Frozen, wish, Howl's Castle in Motion and such.
I think we have in common with childenren period. And also I used to find or learn some lessons of life in the stories or charictors tellings.
I think It'not the problem with adults or not, but we can enjoy it or not.

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Hi Stella,
Thank you for taking the time to answer this question.
And yes, I agree with you. I love watching animations too! :)
- Teacher Elly~


My answer about that question is not. 
>> My answer to that question is no.

Producers Making animation films are adults and my friends including me are loving the kind of flims.
>> Producers making animation films are adults, and my friends, including me, are loving those kinds of films.
OR >> Adults produce animation movies, and both my friends and I enjoy watching those kinds of movies.

Also, Threre are virious kinds of animations. 
>> Also, there are various kinds of animations. 

Some animations are more loved by adults than kidsl For example, Frozen, wish, Howl's Castle in Motion and such.
>> Some animations are more loved by adults than kids, for example, Frozen, Wish, Howl's Moving Castle, and such.

I think we have in common with childenren period. 
>> I think we have in common with children. 
OR >> I suppose we have something in common with children.

And also I used to find or learn some lessons of life in the stories or charictors tellings.
>> 
Additionally, I used to discover or pick up/learn certain life lessons from the stories or characters' narratives.

I think It'not the problem with adults or not, but we can enjoy it or not.
>> I think it isn't a problem with the adults, we can either enjoy it or not.
OR >> We can either appreciate it or not, but I don't think it's an issue with the adults.
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