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What is some good news that changed your life?

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umm when i heared that don't more overtime at work.
about two years ago, our work should two overtime everyday.
sure of i recived overtime pay, but i was not happy.
because i after work, i go to home and wash and i had some some free time.
there was a little free time. but now a days, our work delete overtime.
so i have many freetime.
so i eat delicoius food with girlfriend, and my friend. and i wathing Utube and freetime is increase.

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Hello, Hun! 
Wow! I think not having to work overtime is indeed good news. It is really important to balance work and life so we won't be too tired from working, and it's nice that your company is trying to help you with that!
- T. Caitlyn 
umm when i heared that don't more overtime at work.
>> Umm, when I heard that there would be no more overtime at work.
about two years ago, our work should two overtime everyday.
>> Two years ago, we had to work two hours of overtime every day.
sure of i recived overtime pay, but i was not happy.
>> Sure, I received overtime pay, but I was not happy.
because i after work, i go to home and wash and i had some some free time.
>> After work, I went home, washed up, and had a little free time.
there was a little free time. but now a days, our work delete overtime.
>> There was little free time. But nowadays, our company has removed overtime.
so i have many freetime.
>> So now, I have a lot of free time.
so i eat delicoius food with girlfriend, and my friend. and i wathing Utube and freetime is increase.
>> So I eat delicious food with my girlfriend and friend. I also watch YouTube, and my free time has increased.
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