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What are some differences between Korea and the philippines that you observed when you visited ?

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I visited Clark and Angeles, Philippines with 3 friends in January last year.
The purpose of the trip was to play golf, drink, and get massages.
So I didn't get the chances to talk to the locals or eat the local food, so I don't know the Philippines very well.
If I go back to the Philippines, I want to experience more of the history, culture, and food of the Philippines instead of playing golf.
If I talk about Korea and the Philippines within the scope of my knowledge,
Both Korea and the Philippines were colonized in the past. Korea by Japan, the Philippines by Spain, the United States, and Japan.
Korea has four seasons, so you can enjoy different sports by season, while the weather in the Philippines is always warm or hot, so it seems that you can only enjoy summer sports.
And the Philippines is a good place to enjoy sports like golf because the cost of living is lower than in Korea.
Also, Filipinos can speak English better than Koreans, so it would be good to travel abroad.

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Hello, Soonho!
Thanks for such a great and detailed answer! I definitely agree—our sports are mostly limited to summer sports. In fact, you can even see some Filipinos playing basketball outdoors under the scorching sun! That¡¯s how passionate they are about sports! 😄

I hope you get the chance to explore more of the Philippines, just like you mentioned. I really appreciate that you¡¯ve made positive memories here.

And by the way, you did a great job constructing your sentences—they were mostly grammatically correct. Great work! 😊
~ T. Ezra

I visited Clark and Angeles, Philippines with 3 friends in January last year.
>> I visited Clark and Angeles in the Philippines with three friends in January last year.
The purpose of the trip was to play golf, drink, and get massages.
>> CORRECT
Or >> We went mainly to play golf, relax, and enjoy ourselves.
So I didn't get the chances to talk to the locals or eat the local food, so I don't know the Philippines very well.
>> Because of that, I didn¡¯t get the chance to talk to locals or try local food, so I don¡¯t know the Philippines very well.
Or >> Since our trip focused on those things, I didn¡¯t really get to talk to local people or try much local food, so honestly, I don¡¯t feel like I know the country well yet.
If I go back to the Philippines, I want to experience more of the history, culture, and food of the Philippines instead of playing golf.
>> CORRECT
Or >> If I get the chance to go again, I¡¯d love to explore more of the Philippines¡¯ history, culture, and traditional food.
If I talk about Korea and the Philippines within the scope of my knowledge,
Both Korea and the Philippines were colonized in the past. Korea by Japan, the Philippines by Spain, the United States, and Japan.
>> CORRECT
Or >> Based on what I know, both Korea and the Philippines were colonized in the past—Korea by Japan, and the Philippines by Spain, the United States, and Japan.
Korea has four seasons, so you can enjoy different sports by season, while the weather in the Philippines is always warm or hot, so it seems that you can only enjoy summer sports.
>> CORRECT
Or >> Korea has four distinct seasons, allowing people to enjoy different seasonal sports. In contrast, the Philippines has warm or hot weather year-round, so it seems like only summer sports are common.
And the Philippines is a good place to enjoy sports like golf because the cost of living is lower than in Korea.

>> CORRECT

Or >> The Philippines is a great destination for enjoying sports like golf, as the cost of living is more affordable compared to Korea.

Also, Filipinos can speak English better than Koreans, so it would be good to travel abroad.
>> CORRECT

Or >> In addition, Filipinos generally speak English better than Koreans, which makes it a great country for international travel.


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