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You mentioned watching Les Miserables today in our class, what scene stood out to you the most, and

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The musical, Les Miserables was really impressive. I made a reservation in advance during my family trip to the US in 2008 and watched the musical in person at a theater on Broadway in New York.
Les Miserables is such a famous novel that I read it when I was young. So in the musical, the actors sang and acted in English, so I couldn't understand it, but I could guess the story.
The musical ran for about two and a half hours and featured hundreds of actors. It’s been so long since I watched it that I can’t remember every single scene, but I think every scene was great.
And you must have read the novel, but I was so moved by the content of the novel. The main character, a young boy who was imprisoned for decades for stealing a loaf of bread because he was hungry, changed his name after being released, made a lot of money, became the mayor of a small town, and helped people in need, seemed so cool.
When I was young, I read this novel and thought I wanted to be like the main character.

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Hello Soonho! I enjoyed reading your thoughts about Les Miserables, I can see that you're definitely a fan of it. I've never seen it in person but I'm sure I'll enjoy it as you did since I appreciate the film version as well. Great sentence construction, by the way!
~ T. Ezra

The musical, Les Miserables was really impressive. 
>> CORRECT
Or >> The musical Les Misérables was incredibly impressive.
I made a reservation in advance during my family trip to the US in 2008 and watched the musical in person at a theater on Broadway in New York.
>> CORRECT
Or >> During a family trip to the US in 2008, I made a reservation in advance and had the chance to watch it live at a Broadway theater in New York.
Les Miserables is such a famous novel that I read it when I was young. 
>> CORRECT
Or >> Since Les Misérables is such a well-known novel, I had already read it when I was younger.
So in the musical, the actors sang and acted in English, so I couldn't understand it, but I could guess the story.
>> CORRECT
Or >> Although the actors performed entirely in English and I couldn’t understand everything, I was still able to follow the story.
The musical ran for about two and a half hours and featured hundreds of actors. 
>> CORRECT
Or >> The show lasted about two and a half hours and featured a large cast.
It’s been so long since I watched it that I can’t remember every single scene, but I think every scene was great.
>> CORRECT
Or >> It's been a long time since I saw it, so I don’t remember every scene in detail, but I remember thinking that each one was outstanding.
And you must have read the novel, but I was so moved by the content of the novel. 
>> CORRECT
Or >> You’ve probably read the novel as well—I was truly moved by its story. 
The main character, a young boy who was imprisoned for decades for stealing a loaf of bread because he was hungry, changed his name after being released, made a lot of money, became the mayor of a small town, and helped people in need, seemed so cool.
>> CORRECT
Or >> The main character, who was imprisoned for many years just for stealing a loaf of bread to satisfy his hunger, eventually changed his name after being released, built a fortune, became the mayor of a small town, and devoted himself to helping others. I thought he was incredibly admirable.
When I was young, I read this novel and thought I wanted to be like the main character.
>> CORRECT
Or >> Reading this novel when I was young made me want to be like him.


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