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Do you think society views aging positively or negatively? Why?

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It is case by case,In Korea 50S 60S spend a lot of money.
They have plastic sugery for cosmetic and try getting young.
It make them ,they look 10yeras younger.
Honestly I don't know it is good or bad?

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Hi, Grace!
As a foreigner, I am also aware of this kind of situation in Korea, as your country is highly advanced in technology and beauty. I think spending money to look young is acceptable as long as we don't become too obsessed with it or as long as we don't use all our savings just for that purpose.
- T. Caitlyn 
It is case by case,
>> It varies case by case. 
In Korea 50S 60S spend a lot of money.
>> In Korea, people in their 50s and 60s tend to spend a lot of money.
They have plastic sugery for cosmetic and try getting young.
>> They undergo plastic surgery for cosmetic reasons and try to look younger.
It make them ,they look 10yeras younger.
>> It makes them look 10 years younger.
Honestly I don't know it is good or bad?
>> Honestly, I don't know if it is good or bad.
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