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Who in your life inspires you the most, and why?

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my mother inspires the most in my life.
i think my mother is great woman.
mother is constantly study and to learn about all.
although my mother is older but try to harder everything and reading books.
and mother loves to my family. and making delicious food to me.
and everyday worry about me.
thanks to my mother and i love my mother and father.

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Hi, Hun!
Your mother seems like a truly great person. It's wonderful to know that she inspires you and that you appreciate her for working hard and continuing to learn even at an older age. I believe that improving oneself while taking care of others is what makes your mother truly inspiring!
- T. Caitlyn 
my mother inspires the most in my life.
>> My mother inspires me the most in my life.
i think my mother is great woman.
>> CORRECT
mother is constantly study and to learn about all.
>> My mother is constantly studying and learning about everything.
although my mother is older but try to harder everything and reading books.
>> Although my mother is older, she tries harder at everything and enjoys reading books.
and mother loves to my family. 
>> And my mother loves our family.
and making delicious food to me.
>> And she makes delicious food for me.
and everyday worry about me.
>> And she worries about me every day.
thanks to my mother and i love my mother and father.
>> I'm really thankful for my mother, and I love both my mother and father.
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