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2025-05-17 712

회원님의 영작문

When dish does not taste good, I usually don't complain about directly. Not showing any superficial response, I resolve to myself, I'm never going to visit this restaurant again.
If I receive a wrong food at a restaurant, first thing I do is asking a server whether this dish is served properly. In most cases, it's a simple serving mistake and can simply fixed by asking them. However, there are circumstances when my order was practically delivered differently. If this is the case, I mention about what I had ordered and show little discomfort about situation, but I still took the dish that has been wrongly served. In most of the cases I didn't have to pay for the dish that was served in mistake. Dealing in this way is efficient, because it's waste of time to wait for the food that ordered again, and I'm getting a free meal despite the inconvenience.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Ms. WooIn! Your tone feels thoughtful and mature, and there’s a quiet confidence in the way you deal with the situation. You come across as someone who values peace over making a fuss, which honestly makes sense in situations like that. Thank you for sharing!
-T. Sonny 
When dish does not taste good, I usually don't complain about directly. 
>>When a dish doesn’t taste good, I usually don’t complain directly.
Not showing any superficial response, I resolve to myself, I'm never going to visit this restaurant again.
>>Without showing any obvious reaction, I simply decide to myself that I’ll never visit that restaurant again.
If I receive a wrong food at a restaurant, first thing I do is asking a server whether this dish is served properly. 
>>If I receive the wrong food at a restaurant, the first thing I do is ask the server whether the dish was served correctly.
In most cases, it's a simple serving mistake and can simply fixed by asking them. 
>>In most cases, it’s a simple serving mistake that can easily be fixed just by asking.
However, there are circumstances when my order was practically delivered differently. 
>>However, there are times when my order is actually delivered incorrectly.
If this is the case, I mention about what I had ordered and show little discomfort about situation, but I still took the dish that has been wrongly served. 
>>In those situations, I mention what I originally ordered and express a bit of discomfort, but I still accept the wrong dish.
In most of the cases I didn't have to pay for the dish that was served in mistake. 
>>Most of the time, I don’t have to pay for it if it was the restaurant’s mistake.
Dealing in this way is efficient, because it's waste of time to wait for the food that ordered again, and I'm getting a free meal despite the inconvenience.
>>Handling it this way feels efficient because it's a waste of time to wait for the correct dish again, and I end up getting a free meal despite the inconvenience.
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