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Q : What three languages would you really like to speak, and why?

A : First one is definitely English because i am working in trade field and i love to travel overseas.
And second one is Japanese because i like Japanese foods, mood, people.
Finally, last one is Spanish because i would like to visit South America in the far future.

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Hello Eddy!
Thank you for your good effort! You shared your language choices and reasons clearly. Here¡¯s a small tip: try to use full sentences (like ¡°The first one is...¡±) and be careful with word forms—for example, use ¡°food¡± (uncountable) instead of ¡°foods.¡± You're doing well—keep practicing!
~~Teacher Kate 

First one is definitely English because i am working in trade field and i love to travel overseas.
>>The first one is definitely English because I am working in the trade field and I love to travel overseas.
And second one is Japanese because i like Japanese foods, mood, people.
>>The second one is Japanese because I like Japanese food, culture, and people.
Finally, last one is Spanish because i would like to visit South America in the far future.
>>Finally, the last one is Spanish because I would like to visit South America in the distant future.
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