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[June-5] Machine
Do you think it is important to read the instructions?
Do you read the instructions before using a machine?
Do you think washing machines and sweeping machines are important?
What is your favourite machine in your home?

[June-6] Patience
Are you more patient now than when you were a child?
Does your job require you to be patient?
How do you feel when you have to do something for a long time?
What is it that makes you feel impatient?
Are you a patient person?

[June-7] Internet
What would you do without the internet?
Do you think you spend too much time online?
How does the internet influence people?
How often do you go online?
When did you start using the internet?

[June-8] Library
Do Chinese kids often go to the library£¿
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What do you usually do in the library£¿
Do you often go to the library£¿

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