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What are some risks of embracing YOLO fully in life?

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If I only enjoy life, maybe I will be regrect that I should have worked hard
life is not just fun,there is sadness,happiness,pleasure in total.
I guess we shudn't seek pleasure.

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Hello, Grace!
You're right! Enjoying life is fine as long as we know how to balance our priorities. Also, thinking about the future is essential, because if we don't, happiness and pleasure might be short-lived.
- T. Caitlyn
If I only enjoy life, maybe I will be regrect that I should have worked hard
>> If I only enjoy life, maybe I will regret that I should have worked hard.
life is not just fun,there is sadness,happiness,pleasure in total.
>> Life is not just fun; there is sadness, happiness, and pleasure altogether.
I guess we shudn't seek pleasure.
>> I guess we shouldn't seek pleasure.
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