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The reason that people like to read

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When they read something, they can feel calm.
Also, it's nice to not think about anything.
Because they have to focus on their reading, it's hard to think about other things and get excited.

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Hi Kara!^^ 

I envy people who like to read. 
I am a lazy reader. 
People read to gain knowledge. 
People who read have a wide range of vocabulary. 
Therefore, I think people who read are smart. 

Andrea 

When they read something, they can feel calm.
>> When they read something, they feel calm.

Also, it's nice to not think about anything.
>> Also, it's nice not to think about anything.

Because they have to focus on their reading, it's hard to think about other things and get excited.
>> Correct 
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