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Why do some people avoid watching or reading the news?

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2025-05-27 318

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I think some young people not interested economy and society.
because they are busy about working and playing.
and now a days, many people is personal.
and many fake news exist.
so it's hard to discern real news.
many broadcast is different political inclination.
so broadcast content is different each broadcasting station.
so we have to watch many different types of news.

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Hi, Hun!
First, I have to say, you did a great job using new words in English. I am very impressed with how you answered this homework. I agree! There is a lot of news, and it's really difficult to discern which one is true, so we have to be really careful about what we believe.
- T. Caitlyn 
I think some young people not interested economy and society.
>> I think some young people are not interested in the economy and society.
because they are busy about working and playing.
>> Because they are busy working and playing.
and now a days, many people is personal.
>> Nowadays, many people are private.
and many fake news exist.
>> And a lot of fake news exists.
so it's hard to discern real news.
>> CORRECT
many broadcast is different political inclination.
>> Many broadcasts have different political inclinations.
so broadcast content is different each broadcasting station.
>> So broadcast content differs from station to station.
so we have to watch many different types of news.
>> CORRECT
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