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Is keeping evidence necessary even when dealing with family and close friends, or is trust enough?

It depends on what situaitions are but, normaly It is necessary to keep evidence because we can not believe relationships keep same stance forever. So when we met important promiss with close friends or family, we have to make anything evidence which could not birth misunderstanding.

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              Is keeping evidence necessary even when dealing with family and close friends, or is trust enough?



It depends on what situaitions are but, normaly It is necessary to keep evidence because we can not believe relationships keep same stance forever. 
>>> It depends on the situation, but normally, it is necessary to keep evidence because we cannot assume that relationships will always remain the same.
>>> OR: While situations may vary, it's usually wise to keep evidence, as relationships can change over time.

So when we met important promiss with close friends or family, we have to make anything evidence which could not birth misunderstanding.
>>> To prevent misunderstandings, it's important to have evidence when we make serious commitments to friends or family.
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