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Before, plastic surgery was a big issue, but now it is acceptable. Why do you think so?

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So many celebrities have plastic surgery or facelift be the reason.
Almost people like preety and young people.
Maybe it could be a basic desire, Same here

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Hello, Grace!
I agree! Celebrities are often considered trendsetters. They are usually admired for their beauty, and their acceptance of plastic surgery, and being proud of it,encourages others to try it too! Also, since many people are already doing it, I think it has become widely acceptable.
- T. Caitlyn
So many celebrities have plastic surgery or facelift be the reason.
>> I think one of the reasons is because many celebrities undergo plastic surgery or facelifts.
Almost people like preety and young people.
>> Most people like pretty and young individuals.
>> OR: Almost all people like pretty and young individuals.
Maybe it could be a basic desire, 
>> Maybe it is a basic desire. 
Same here
>> I feel the same way.
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