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When was the last time you realized that you are having \"bad luck\"

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At that time, l was preparing breakfast, but I couldn't remember what I was trying to make. I opened a can, I thought that the empty can was dirty, so I wanted to wash, I put my hand in he it, but can's entry was very sharp, I felt to got a cut when I turn my hand in it. I suprised and took off rubber gloves. My finger bled a lot. My husband washed blood and bandage. I don't like these feeling, just think about it, I get goosebumps. This day I was having bad luck.

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Ms. Eva!
Bad things commonly happen to everyone, and no matter how much we try to avoid them by being cautious, we still encounter them. What should we do then?  Of course, knowing how to handle these things will help us a lot.
Stay well always!
Aki~

At that time, l was preparing breakfast, but I couldn't remember what I was trying to make.
>>> At that time, I was preparing breakfast, but I couldn't remember what I was trying to make.

I opened a can, I thought that the empty can was dirty, so I wanted to wash, I put my hand in he it, but can's entry was very sharp, I felt to got a cut when I turn my hand in it.
>>> I opened a can and thought the empty can was dirty, so I wanted to wash it. I put my hand in it, but the edge of the can was very sharp. I felt like I got a cut when I turned my hand inside.

I suprised and took off rubber gloves.
>>> I was surprised and took the rubber gloves off.

My finger bled a lot. My husband washed blood and bandage.
>>> My finger bled a lot. My husband washed the blood and put on a bandage.

I don't like these feeling, just think about it, I get goosebumps.
>> I don't like this feeling; just think about it, I get goosebumps.

This day I was having bad luck.
>>> I thought that day that I was having bad luck.
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