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Actually, I love watching dramas more than those two options. But if I had to choose one, I like reading books more than watching movies. Because I don¡¯t really like going to the movie theater and I can¡¯t focus on it more than 3 hours. So I usually watch the compact of movies on Youtube. When I was young, I really liked going to the library and I borrowed a lot of books once a week. I read the kind of novels from a lot of countries. I think that time enhances my reading skills, so I can read very fast when I read the korean language exam text. It was very helpful for me.

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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Oh! I didn't know that you prefer dramas over movies. 
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Actually, I love watching dramas more than those two options. 
>>Correct
OR: Actually, I prefer watching dramas over watching movies.
But if I had to choose one, I like reading books more than watching movies. Because I don¡¯t really like going to the movie theater and I can¡¯t focus on it more than 3 hours. 
>>If I have to choose one, I will choose reading books because I don't really like going to the movie theater and I can't focus on it for more than three hours.
So I usually watch the compact of movies on Youtube. 
>>So, I usually watch movies on YouTube.
When I was young, I really liked going to the library and I borrowed a lot of books once a week. 
>>When I was young, I really liked going to the library and borrowing a lot of books once a week.
I read the kind of novels from a lot of countries. 
>>I read different novels from a lot of  countries.
I think that time enhances my reading skills, so I can read very fast when I read the korean language exam text. 
>>I think those times enhanced my reading skills, so I could read very fast when I had the Korean language exam.
It was very helpful for me.
>>Correct
OR: It really helped me a lot.
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