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When is it difficult to decide?

작성자: 김*경
2025-06-02 539

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There are some cases where I can feel it is difficult decide. Number one is when options have both good and bad things at the same time. In this case, both the advantages and disadvantages seem equally significant, making it hard to view the positives as truly beneficial. The negatives appear to outweigh or cancel out the good, leaving me unable to choose either option. Number two is when my two close friends quarrel. I can’t side either one because I don’t want to offend either. The last thing that makes me decide either one difficult is when I lack enough information or experience to make right choice.
Anyway, to decide is not an easy job because it takes related information and favorable situations to make a right judgement.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Good afternoon, Steve! ^-^

Weighing your options requires time and effort, so decision-making will always be challenging. Feeling indecisive and second-guessing yourself are normal aspects of the process.

Thank you for answering your homework. I hope you're doing alright. I will see you later in class.
Have a good day!

__T. Mayleen :)


There are some cases where I can feel it is difficult decide.
>>> There are some situations in which I find it difficult to make a decision.
Number one is when options have both good and bad things at the same time. In this case, both the advantages and disadvantages seem equally significant, making it hard to view the positives as truly beneficial.
>>> Number one is when both options have good and bad things at the same time. In this case, both the advantages and disadvantages seem equally significant, making it hard to view the positives as truly beneficial.
>>> OR: Number one is when options contain both positive and negative aspects. In this scenario, both the advantages and downsides appear to be equally important, making it difficult to recognize the positives as actually advantageous.
The negatives appear to outweigh or cancel out the good, leaving me unable to choose either option.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: The downsides appear to exceed or cancel out the positives, leaving me unable to select either option.
Number two is when my two close friends quarrel. I can’t side either one because I don’t want to offend either.
>>> Number two is when my two close friends quarrel. I can’t side with either one because I don’t want to offend either.
>>> OR: Number two is when two of my close friends argue. I can't take sides because I don't want to insult either party.
The last thing that makes me decide either one difficult is when I lack enough information or experience to make right choice.
>>> The last thing that makes it difficult is when I lack enough information or experience to make the right choice.
Anyway, to decide is not an easy job because it takes related information and favorable situations to make a right judgement.
>>> Anyway, to decide is not an easy job because it takes related information and favorable situations to make a right judgment.
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