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Social support system for older adults

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There are many social support systems for older people in Korea. Among them, medical welfare is the best for the poor old to visit and get some treatments of hospitals. And there are many seats for older people in the buses or subways. There are monthly grants to compensate for the living costs of poor older people.

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Hi, Gi Yean!
I think it's nice that the government provides several benefits for older people in Korea, especially now that the aging population is continuously growing.
- T. Caitlyn
There are many social support systems for older people in Korea. 
>> CORRECT
Among them, medical welfare is the best for the poor old to visit and get some treatments of hospitals. 
>> Among them, medical welfare is the best for poor elderly people to visit hospitals and receive treatment.
And there are many seats for older people in the buses or subways. 
>> There are many seats designated for older people on buses and subways.
There are monthly grants to compensate for the living costs of poor older people.
>> CORRECT
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