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HOMEWORK: Prepare a story that you know that is your favorite/greatest story.
You must include:
The name of the story
A brief summarization of the story
Why is this the story that you choose?



The name of the story: I'll cross the world to you
A brief summarization of the story: It is a story of two girls with the same name exchanging letters back and forth in time.
Why is this the story that you choose?: It was impressed by the process of the two girls understanding each other and getting close to each other through letters.

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Hi, Yeonsuk!

I'm happy that you wrote your homework. It's nice that you describe what's the book about. We'll discuss it in class tomorrow.
~Teacher Jess

It is a story of two girls with the same name exchanging letters back and forth in time.
>> It's the story of two girls, sharing the same name, who write letters to each other across time.

It was impressed by the process of the two girls understanding each other and getting close to each other through letters.
>> I was impressed by how the two girls came to understand each other and grew closer through their letters.
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