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Are you confident that your new leader will bring change to your country?

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I hope our new leader can change our country. Today we chose new leader, but I don't know result now, we can know it tomorrow dawn. According to exit poll, candidate no.1 will win.
Our former president made our country people very hard. He deceive people and tried to suppress our freedom. He and his wife didn't respect and afraid people. These person can't make good country. Our country have a lot of problems now. I want that our new president will make happy country.

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Ms. Eva!
Congratulations on your new President! I hope that you will see better changes and make people happy under the JML Administration.
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I hope our new leader can change our country.
>>> CORRECT!

Today we chose new leader, but I don't know result now, we can know it tomorrow dawn.
>>>  Today we chose a new leader, but I don't know the result now, we can know it tomorrow morning.

According to exit poll, candidate no.1 will win.
>>> According to the exit poll, candidate no.1 will win.

Our former president made our country people very hard.
>>  Our former president made life hard.

He deceive people and tried to suppress our freedom.
>>>  He deceived people and tried to suppress our freedom.

He and his wife didn't respect and afraid people.
>>>  He and his wife didn't respect or were not afraid of people.

These person can't make good country.
>>> These people can't make a good country.

Our country have a lot of problems now.
>>>  Our country has a lot of problems now.

I want that our new president will make happy country.
>>> I want our new president will make country happy.
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