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When I buy something I ask myself that 'is this really important to me?'. And I can afford to buy it then I finally determine to buy it. And I browse again because another sites often sell same product cheaper price. But I often determine something impulsively without thoughts. Sometimes I'm gonna trying to decide for a long time if I should do something because it is very important to me. And I feel very tired to think about that and I suddenly conclude that problem and avoid thinking about that again.

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Hi, Megan^^
Yes. Of course, if it is very important, we should take it seriously  and give it careful thought.
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When I buy something I ask myself that 'is this really important to me?'. 
>>Before buying something, I ask myself, "is this really important to me?"
And I can afford to buy it then I finally determine to buy it. 
>>And if I can afford to buy it, then I am finally determined to buy it.
And I browse again because another sites often sell same product cheaper price. 
>>And I browse more because other sites often sell the same product at a cheaper price.
But I often determine something impulsively without thoughts. 
>>But most of the time I make decision impulsively without thinking. 
Sometimes I'm gonna trying to decide for a long time if I should do something because it is very important to me. 
>>Sometimes I spend a long time trying to decide whether I should do something because it is very important to me.
And I feel very tired to think about that and I suddenly conclude that problem and avoid thinking about that again.
>>And I feel very tired to think about that and I suddenly conclude and avoid thinking about that again.
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