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What are some common problems travelers face? Explain.

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Travelling makes our lives more bountiful and broadens our perspectives on the world. However, there are several problems travelers face.
One of the most common issues is loss or theft. Many people don't pay enough attention to their luggage and belongings. If you lose important things such as a passport, you might have trouble continuing your trip. Also, you should always be cautious about theft in popular tourist attractions where pickpocketing often occurs. Secondly, perhaps not as common as the case above, There is a slight possibility of facing more serious crimes. Some travelers occasionally experience robbery and racism. If you are exposed to these serious situations, you should call the police and then contact your embassy. Lastly, I want to emphasize the importance of your health during a trip. Local foods or your poor physical condition can cause you to have difficulties. To avoid the worst-case scenario, always carry medicine for emergencies in your bag.

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Travelling makes our lives more bountiful and broadens our perspectives on the world. 
>> Correct
However, there are several problems travelers face.
>> Correct
One of the most common issues is loss or theft. 
>> Correct
Many people don't pay enough attention to their luggage and belongings. 
>> Correct
If you lose important things such as a passport, you might have trouble continuing your trip. 
>> If you lose important things such as a passport, you might have trouble going on with your trip. 
Also, you should always be cautious about theft in popular tourist attractions where pickpocketing often occurs. 
>> Correct
Secondly, perhaps not as common as the case above, There is a slight possibility of facing more serious crimes. 
>> Secondly, perhaps not as common as the case above, there is a slight possibility of facing more serious crimes. 
Some travelers occasionally experience robbery and racism. 
>> Correct
If you are exposed to these serious situations, you should call the police and then contact your embassy. 
>> Correct
Lastly, I want to emphasize the importance of your health during a trip. 
>> Correct
Local foods or your poor physical condition can cause you to have difficulties. 
>> Correct
To avoid the worst-case scenario, always carry medicine for emergencies in your bag.
>> Correct
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